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28.53 mins and 353 mistakes oh yeah. I am pretty l33t ehh guys?
fun and frusterating. Its a b last
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This is okay. I mean the story is fine and the art is phenomenal but I feel thrown off by two main things.
Firstly the girl is WAY ugly. She has a nice bod but a hoorible face.
Secondly no voice actors totally distract you and bore me to dealth. Plus it makes it looks like you cant animate someone speaking.
Long story short get some bloody voice actors, cus If I wanted to read that much I would have an "A" in English.
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It was well made and creative. But when the story is half based on an already made franchise it does take a little away from the creativity. In some parts the animation felt choppy and didn't flow smoothly, but overall it wasn't sketchy at all. It was definetly a good Idea to put that disclaimer on since when I watched it I was laughing at some of the things in your version that were just dead wrong. But once I read the disclaimer it all made much more sense. The voice acting was good, one thing you could try for your next movie would be to work on transitions between scenes. Nice job on the movie overall.
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Great, first time threw I saw no mistakes. I wouldn't have been surprised if krinkles had made this himself. On the second time threw I saw some floating hands in some spots but it was still actiony and fun. This was epic.
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"I havent revewed a movie in a while but..."
I LIVE IN THE ART FORUM!
anyway, in the words of tankmen about to watch a chick flick, "Lets do this!"
Graphics: They were good enough, the background suited it, and most of the pics were pretty good, its just that some of the pics weren't to good. Plus the quality was messed up on some pics.
Style: Tankmen, meh.
Sound:Used the theme song, so its a ten
Violence:well, not much, Its a zero but this wont change the overall score.
Interactivity:TEN, thats had a preloader, and working buttons.
Humor:Some pics were funny, some weren't.
Overall:A good art forum collab, but the pics quality could have been better,used the theme song,+a few pics were funny! There was no violence but all of the buttons and the preloader worked!
Final Comments:Well, I would put a credits option, and a linking button to the thread.
Your Grade, B- could be better, but still NOT BAD ;-)
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But this had to be done. The "The Black Bar" has recently ended aswell.
Author's Response:
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people want me to add a button.
"it will help us read" they say
i add a button
take the button out they ask
"the button is too anoying" they say
wtf lol
dude i dont think art collabs are going to happen for a while...
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The main reson i did check this movi out was to get a quick blam. But after watching the whole thing this is not to shabby. Wastnt the best i have ever sen but was still funny.
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1. it was stick and evrything can be better when NOT a stick movie.(this was still great, just could have been slightly cooler. Only deducting graphics by One.
2. I dont like that the flash loops. You shuld have an THE END--REPLAY screen. that would be cool
Notes: i dont mean tobe rough just couse its a stick film. I am just making a piont. Your flash surpasses anything i am within. All in all good-job and I'd put this as an A. Well done!
Author's Response:
Well, the first scene was all inside of a Movie Clip. At the end, I apparently forgot the "_root.play();" ActionScript, so the first scene looped. Now it's fixed, and all 5 and a half minutes of the movie can be viewed without using the scene select.
Thanks!
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I did it the whole way without any skips but i cant get 42. Anyone know which one it is?
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Mostly because of the custom preloader but guess that wasn't yours. any way that was really funny with the avalanche in the background. One thing you could do to improve this movie is not have it just end. Secondly don't have the guy just standing in the middle of nowhere, only moving his mouth. Have him be like an eskamo, moving and dancing. That will make the more interesting. And thirdly have the avalanche engulf the man. Have him be an the bottom of the mountain while the climber is on the top. The when every thing is white, have th song continue on rally quiet. Try sing it yourself. To get an okay mic. just go to target and get one from logitech. They have okay stuff that is cheap.
Author's Response:
Ok, the preloader is from the flash group, Flash Abuse, I made this in a few hours, what would ya expect? Thanks for the review.
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